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    December 08

    才子作品

    才子,我们班的"文学家",因名字中有魏且面黑,故称Black Way .

    下面介绍他一篇自己非常满意的作品.

     

      自家伤感

    热望与你同行,

    偏你独自走开,              

    我只合踏者雨来的方向,

    追随空气般你的影子,

    车上,自家伤感.

     

    希望今又成空,

    且消受终天惆怅.

    看残雨中的飞虫,

    舞得扑朔的翅膀,

    雨中,自家伤感.

                          ---  Black Way

    怎么样?很有feel吧?

    那么就请高手们回复,写下你们的感想或给他的诗提点建议吧^^

    他很需要你们的支持哦~~~~~~~~~

     

     

     

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